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It's a shame you are leaving newgrounds.

This song is brilliant. I like your 'trance-like' style. Nice use of LFO and Filter. I highly recommend using Ableton Live as it is a really good tool that includes many features you would find useful.

If you are serious about leaving Newgrounds as an artist, please visit www.soundclick.com. This website is really good for developing artists such as myself.

Do not let lack of good ratings and comments on Newgrounds discourage you. The majority of users on this website are children, hence the criticism shouldn't be that well thought out or mature. Keep up the good work!

Genious.

I too am only using FLStudio Trial to compose my music. I understand the lack of flexibility that the trial has and must say, you've done a pretty decent job considering.

This piece is definately going into my iPod. Thank you, keep composing.

DjRin responds:

=] Someone who understands!!! It's actually pretty awesome considering it's a trial, though the lack of being able to return to your work is a major thorn in my side. Wish there was a work around, but I just gotta save up a few paychecks and buy the program.

But thanks man, and thanks for not giving me a 10 I really feel like this song isn't all that amazing haha. :) But then agian, i apriciate those other tens... but you know, an honest opinion's better than a good one! :)

-DjRiN

Nice concept.

Nice use of chords. I would have lowerd the bass drum just a wee bit. Other than that, great song.

fyat66 responds:

the bass is pretty low but when i uploaded it it didnt put in all of the sound to it
thanks though im really proud of it

Trippy song.

Definately a good song depicting hope and fear.

Web Worthy

Definately one of the finer submissions I've heard today. Good transitions, creative use of triplets in the cymbals.

Brilliant!

Very creative peice with great transitions. Very nice choice in instruments and effects. The gentle use of the ring modulator on one of the melodies fit in really nicely. The pauses were a great idea, though laking rythim. Keep producing, you are doing a great job.

HexMonkey responds:

Thank you very much :D

Creative, to say the least.

I am also a composer of Ambient/Electronic music. I am studying music therapy and am always inspired by artists with the same point of view on music as mine. Your music is very cool and you have creative ideas and nice sequences. If I were you I would work on transitions and equalizers of your peice. Things tend to happen 'all of the sudden', I have the exact same problem. The easiest way to introduce a new idea or sequence is starting it at a low volume and let it grow, or to have it filtered before having it clean. Its all about transition, my friend.

I am a new developing artist here at Newgrounds. I would appreciate people listening to my work and giving me criticism.

Trancendence @JLozano072192

Age 31, Male

Musician

Laredo, Texas

Joined on 9/7/10

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